1. She took dance classes. She had no natural grace or sense of rhythm. She eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer.
2. Bears emerge from hibernation in the spring. They wander through wetlands. They feed mainly on grasses.
3. Jesse Ventura has denied an interest in running for the senate. Ventura is the former governor of Minnesota.
4. The boy asked his father a question. The boy is five years old. The question was about death.
5. My aunt is very strict with my cousin. She expects her to study all the time. 6. I was exhausted. I stared at the page. I was unable to comprehend a single word.
7. Doonesbury cartoons satirize contemporary politics. Readers don't always find this funny. They demand that newspapers not carry the strip.
8. The campus parking problem is getting worse. The university is not building any new garages. 9. The US has been highly dependent on foreign oil for many years. Alternate sources of energy are only now being sought.
Revised:
1. She took dance classes, but she had no natural grace or sense of rhythm, so she eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer. Revised:
2. When bears emerge from hibernation in the spring, they wander through wetlands and feed mainly on grasses. Revised:
3. Jesse Ventura, the former governor of MN, has denied an interest in running for the senate. Revised:
4. The five-year-old boy asked his father a question about death. Revised:
5. My aunt is very strict with my cousin, expecting her to study all the time. Revised:
6. Exhausted, I stared at the page, unable to comprehend a single word.
7. Doonesbury cartoons laugh at contemporary politicians, but readers don't always find this funny and demand that newspapers not carry the strip.
8. The campus parking problem is getting worse because the university is not building any new garages.
9. Although the US has been highly dependent on foreign oil for many years, alternate sources are only now being sought.
