大作文

范文一：我国某市居民春节假期花销的比例

第一段

The given pie chart shows us proportions of residents’expenditure in a certain Chinese city during ① the Spring Festival celebrations / ② the Lunar New Year. As is revealed by the statistics, ① the percentage of money spent on New Year gifts is approximately 40%, the largest among the four categories. / ② money spent on gifts accounts for up to 40% or so of the total expenses, the largest share among all the four categories. ① In comparison, the proportion of feasts, transportation and others is about 20% respectively. / ② In comparison, the expenses for dining, transportation and the rest take up roughly one fifth respectively.

第二段

It goes without saying that the given chart is meant to draw our attention to =emphasize = highlight =dramatize Chinese citizens’accent upon interpersonal relationships. Behi

nd the scene, there must be numerous shaping factors, with the following respects not the least among them. ＋

写法一：To begin with, ① it is closely related to / it is bound up with + a vast increase of ordinary people’s income. / ② it is closely related to a vast income increase of domestic ordinary people for the past years. / ③ It is closely related to a marked enhancement of people’s living standards in China for the past decades. + In addition, our national tr

aditional convention is another important influencing power that we may not neglect. 写法二：To begin with，it is closely related to the vast enhancement of people’s living standards for the past years. With the remarkable development of economy and society, the income of most ordinary people in China has been dramatically increased, which enables them to afford the investment in socializing with others.

写法三：When China and the Chinese were not prosperous, what ordinary people expected from festivals was nothing but better food or new clothes. Now with the enhancement of living standards, domestic people pay much more attention to the fortification of their kinship and friendship. From my perspective, this scene can solidly prove that we Chinese people are now living a happy and harmonious life.

＋ Our Chinese national tradition is another important factor that we may not neglect. To exchange gifts with relatives or friends during festivals is a long-established convention on this aged land.

第三段

写法一：Obviously, what we need to pay attention to is the fact that what is being

revealed by the given statistics is not a specific scene in a certain city but a very common phenomenon all over China. Besides, Since to spend much of the expenses on New Year gifts is a quite established situation, it is my belief that the trend as revealed by the given data will definitely continue for years ahead.

写法二：From my perspective, this scene can solidly prove that we Chinese people are

now living a happy and harmonious life. Moreover, it is my firm belief that with the further development of our national economy, we common people will definitely spend our festivals in a more diversified, colorful and enriched way. We are proud of being Chinese!

范文二：中国某大学学生购书方式比例图

第一段

The given pie chart shows us proportions of different ways students purchase books in a

certain Chinese university. As is revealed by the given data, those who buy books directly online

account for approximately 44% and those who browse in physical stores while making final purchase online take up roughly 42%, which means that the online shopping of books has become a dominant choice among the students. Parenthetically, in comparison, merely 12% of the college students now get their books from physical stores.

第二段

写法一：It goes without saying that the chart is meant to emphasize young generation’s

overwhelming preference for online shopping nowadays. What may be responsible for such a scene? To begin with, this situation is closely related to the increasingly easy access\\ to the internet for the past years. In addition, the comparatively low prices of online commodities are another important factor that we may not neglect.

写法二：It goes without saying that the chart is meant to emphasize young generation’s overwhelming preference for online shopping nowadays. With the remarkable development of our electronic commerce，college students in mounting numbers now choose to make their purchase from online stores rather than from physical shops. Towards such a trend，many scholars，economists and sociologists have widely expressed their controversial views. And generalizations have proved difficult so far.

写法三：What may be responsible for the thriving of electronic commerce in China today?

There must be numerous reasons lying behind, with the following respects not the least among them. To begin with, it is closely related to the remarkable development of our national economy. Besides, the change of people’s attitude towards online shopping is another important factor that we may not neglect. Lastly, this trend is also somewhat promoted by the positive guidance ／ the favorable policies from our government.

第三段

（ Reasons 的写法）：① Since reasons above are established，we may safely come to the conclusion that the tendency will definitely continue for years ahead. ／ ② The conclusion that online shopping will continue to enjoy an increasing popularity among domestic people for years ahead. + What we need to handle is to properly resolve the potential problems that

electronic commerce may cause and to put our development of internet economy onto solid and sustained footing.

写法二：Obviously, what we need to pay attention to is the fact that what is being revealed by the statistics is not a specific scene in a certain Chinese institute but a very common

phenomenon taking place among a majority of Chinese youngsters nowadays. It is my hypothesis that with the further development of our national economy , this trend will definitely continue for years ahead.

柱图（Bar Chart）

范文一：不同汽车品牌中国市场份额变化图

第一段

第一句：① The given bar chart shows us that the market shares of different auto brands experienced drastic changes among Chinese consumers ＝ in China recently.

② The given bar chart shows us drastic changes with regard to the market shares of different auto brands in China recently.

③ For the past years China has witnessed an encouraging and inspiring economic phenomenon that autos made in China ＝ domestic autos have been winning an increasing popularity among us domestic consumers.

第二句：To be specific, as revealed by the picture, our country saw a marked surge of its

auto market share from xx % in 2008 to xx% in 2009 whereas during the same period of time, Japan, just the opposite, namely, from xx % to xx %. Parenthetically = By the way , the percentage of US cars in the Chinese market remained almost stagnant.

第二段

写法一 第一句：① It goes without saying that the given chart is closely meant to draw our attention to an encouraging and inspiring economic phenomenon taking place in China.

② It goes without saying that the given chart is closely meant to draw our attention to an encouraging and inspiring phenomenon taking place among the Chinese college students nowadays.

③ Obviously, the given chart intends to draw our attention to the inspiring economic phenomenon that domestic autos are winning an increasing popularity among the Chinese consumers nowadays.

第二句：① With the remarkable development of related science and technology, our national auto industry has largely enhanced the general quality of their products. ② With the remarkable development of our economy, the quality of our national autos has also been improved to a measurable degree . 第三句： ＋ Towards such a tendency, many scholars, critics and economists have

explicitly expressed their positive views. And there are solid reasons for us to reverse our former bias against products “made in China” and switch to an optimistic attitude towards our national autos.

写法二（用原因写）：What may account for such an encouraging situation of Chinese cars’ growing popularity in the domestic market ? The following respects may count the most. To begin with, the change is intimately related to the remarkable development of Chinese economy for the past decades. ① In addition , the change of Chinese people’s attitude towards national products is another important influencing power that we may not neglect. Besides, we have to admit the fact that such a trend is also somewhat promoted by positive guidance from our central government. ② In addition, our Chinese ordinary people have generally got over their former prejudice against products “made in China” and mostly switched to be in favor of domestic cars , which also plays an important role in such a tendency as revealed by the given data.

第三段

Based on the analyses above, it may be safe to draw a conclusion that the tendency of an growing popularity of domestic cars is quite established and will definitely continue for the years ahead. Also, ① it is my firm belief that our national auto industry will surely dwarf that of all other countries in the world one day in the future. ② it is my firm belief that cars made in China will surely dwarf cars made in Japan whatsoever one day in the future. ＋ We are proud of

being Chinese!

范文二：中国某大学大学生兼职比例变化图

第一段

第一句：① The given bar chart shows us a constant change with regard to the number of undergraduate students doing part-time jobs in a certain Chinese university during their study period. ② The given bar chart shows us a constant change with regard to the proportion of students who do part-time jobs in a certain Chinese university during their four-year undergraduate period. ③ The given bar chart shows us that the number of students who do part-time jobs has enjoyed a continued increase from grade one to grade four in a certain Chinese university. 第二句：① To be specific, as revealed by the statistics, when students have just entered

their college life，merely 60% of them choose to do temporary jobs in their spare time while during their senior year，the percentage shoots up to 88%. There must be something thought-provoking left behind.

② The proportion of students doing jobs increases mildly from 60% in the fresh year to 71% in the sophomore period and then to 74% in the junior year. + More strikingly , the percentage suddenly shoots up to XX upon their graduation = The percentage suddenly shoots up during their expectation of graduation, namely, to 88%. 第二段

写法一（引伸写法）：Obviously， the given data are closely meant to draw our attention to the situation that large numbers of Chinese senior college students spend their time and energy doing part-time jobs nowadays。With the remarkable development of economy and society, challenges and competitions go increasingly fierce. Under such circumstances, college students in growing numbers are putting emphasis upon the cultivation of their practical abilities, which can be realized by participating in temporary work. Many educational experts，as well as sociologists, have widely expressed controversial views upon such a trend. And so far generalizations have proved difficult. 写法二：What may account for such a tendency that most senior students spend their time doing part-time jobs? To begin with, such a change is closely related to our national economic

development. The rapid advancement of our market-oriented society has offered an increasing amount of opportunities for students to be engaged in temporary work. In addition，the change of students’ attitude towards the value of doing jobs is another important factor that we may not neglect. With graduation around the corner, senior students, compared with those of other grades, develop a clearer awareness of the value of practical abilities for their future career. Parenthetically, this situation also has something to do with certain favorable policies from some institutes.

第三段

Based on the analyses above, it would be safe to conclude that the tendency is quite

established and will definitely continue for the years ahead. ① What we need to handle is to strike a balance between study and work and to develop ourselves in an all-around way. ② What we need to handle is to properly resolve the potential problems urbanization may cause and to put this process onto a solid and sustained footing. ＋ To begin with， for senior

students，there is much more spare time available for part-time jobs. In addition, senior students have got a clearer awareness that to do part-time jobs can bring much benefit to their success in the coming job-hunting. In addition, ① for senior students, the enhancement of awareness of the value of work experience is another important factor that we may not neglect. ② senior students, compared with others, put more emphasis upon practical abilities, which is of vitality to their success in the job market.

在讲某XX ：第一段末句 第二段首句 第三段首句的万能句

Apparently， what we need to pay attention to is the fact that what is

being revealed by the given statistics is not a specific situation in a certain single university but a common phenomenon taking place among all Chinese colleges nowadays: that senior students are putting unparalleled emphasis upon the cultivation of their work ability.

范文三：世界烟草总产量比例变化图

写法一

第一段

The given chart reveals to us a world-wide tendency of a decrease of tobacco production

in recent years. Let’s take a closer examination upon the bar chart. The total amount suffered a slump from 0.45 billion in 1994 to 0.42 billion in 1996 . Thus，there are solid reasons to foresee that the world tobacco consumption will experience a decline in the years ahead , as well.

第二段

What may account for such an encouraging and inspiring phenomenon？ It is closely

related to the enhancement of people’s awareness that smoking does great harm to our life. To begin with, cigarettes “burn” much money. As is revealed by the given cartoon, According to a latest survey, up to 200 billion dollars are wasted due to smoking. In addition, what is more frightening is that smoking produces irrevocable destruction to people’s physical health. ① Data in an authoritative paper published recently show us that approximately 3 million smokers go to early graves each year. ② Approximately 3 million people smoke at the cost of their lives each year = 3 million people lost their lives just owing to smoking each year.

第三段

Despite the great harm of tobacco consumption, the number of smokers is still significant. The latest research tells us=there are sufficient statistics that show smokers account for up to one

fifth of the world’s total population. Yet it is still my firm belief that through concerted and continued efforts, we human beings will surely surmount this difficulty and our future will definitely be promising.

写法二（开门见山）

For the past one and a half decade＝For the past decade or so, China has witnessed a

phenomenon that domestic people in mounting numbers have been migrating into cities. As is shown by the given bar chart, urban population enjoyed a marked surge from 800million in 2000 to 2000 million in 2015 whereas during the same period， rural population suffered a drastic decline from 1000 million to 600 million。There must be something thought-provoking left behind the statistics.

It goes without saying that the given picture intends to draw our attention to China’s urbanization. With the remarkable development of economy and society since the opening-up and reform policy, rural residents in growing numbers are shifting into city areas, to seek for salaried jobs and to pursue a better life. ① Towards such a trend of urbanization, sociologists , critics and politicians have widely extended controversial views upon its social, economic and cultural implications. ② Towards the social and economic implications of such a trend, scholars, critics and policy-makers of all stripes of life have widely expressed their controversial views. +

So far generalizations have proved difficult.

It is my firm belief that such a tendency of people’s migration is quite established and thus will definitely continue in the years ahead. Meanwhile = Furthermore = Moreover，what we need to manage is to properly resolve potential problems urbanization may cause and to put such

a process onto a solid and sustained footing.

范文四：中国城镇人口比例变化图

第一段

The given bar chart shows us the dramatic changes with regard to the urban and rural population in China for recent years. ① To be specific，rural areas witnessed a decline of its population from 1000 million in 2000 to 600 million in 2015 whereas cities saw a surge of the number of its residents， namely，from 300 million to 1200 million during the same period.

② To be specific, in the year 2000, 800 million Chinese lived in cities while up to 1000 million in the country; yet when it came to the year 2015 ＝ yet 15 years later, China’s rural population declined to 200 million whereas that of urban areas rose remarkably to the number of 1200 million. ＋ Obviously, what is being revealed by the given data is a fact that China is

experiencing the biggest wave of urbanization ever witnessed.

第二段

There may be numerous reasons accounting for today’s migration among domestic people, with the following shaping factors not the least. To begin with, China’s urbanization is closely related to its marked development in economy since the implementation ＝ performance of the opening-up and reform policy. In addition, the change of attitude towards movement among the ordinary people is another important influencing power that we may not ignore. Lastly, today’s massive migration from rural to urban areas among the Chinese people has something to do with ＝ is also somewhat promoted by policies from related authorities .

第三段

Since the factors above are established，the trend of urbanization in China will definitely continue in the years ahead . What we need to handle is to properly resolve potential problems

this process may cause， and to put our urbanization onto a solid and sustained footing .