(英语)中考英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·广东中考模拟）近年来，我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不 敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。 请以 “My opinions about school bullying” 为题， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。 提示：

1. What do you think of school bullying?

2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied? 要求：

1. 所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以 使行文连贯； 2. 80词以上。

参考词汇：心理问题mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying

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【答案】My opinions about school bullying

School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?

If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own. 【解析】 【详解】

本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对校园欺凌的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the

bullies on my own中it作形式主语以及“比较级and比较级”。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

2．（·辽宁中考模拟）（B）按要求完成大作文（80词左右）

节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，请以“My Green Life”为题写一篇短文，简单谈谈“绿色生活”的重要性，以及你所倡导的“绿色生活”方式。

写作要求：词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得透露姓名等个人信息。 【答案】My Green Life

As the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life. 【解析】 【分析】

本文主题关于绿色生活，环境保护，注意文章内容。 【详解】

首先点明如今的生活环境，越来越差，绿色生活势在必行。其次点明绿色生活的重要性。然后说我在日常生活中对绿色出行作出的贡献，骑自行车，出门关灯等。最后呼吁大家一起努力。 【点睛】

首先正确理解作文题目，不要偏题，本文是关于绿色生活，它的重要性，以及你在日常生活中是如何践行绿色生活的。其次，在语句正确的基础上，多运用连词，使文章升华，长短句结合，使文章更上一档次。

3．（·吉林省实验中考模拟）（B） 《朗读者》第五期节目中，主持人在开场白中说道：“我们的一生，会经历很多的第一次，难忘而又宝贵，它意味着我们的成长。”请谈谈你人生中最难忘的“第一次”，或许是第一次做家务、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并说说你从中学到了什么或有哪些收获。不少于80词。（文中不得出现真实的人名和校名） 【答案】The First Cooking

Last weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn't know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn't lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed. 【解析】 【分析】

本文为材料作文，需要写出第一次做某事，人生中有许多第一次，可以挑选一件让自己感觉深刻，并且从中学到了许多东西的事件来写，这样的话，贴近生活实际，学生有话可说。 【详解】

本文写了我的第一次做饭，先交代背景知识，因为父母不在家，所以我不得不自己动手，动手做的过程中，由于没有经验，理所当然地失败了。但是，我不能气馁，要从失败中找原因，从哪里跌倒，就从哪里起来，所以，第二周，我让妈妈教我做菜，获得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放弃，就能获得成功。 【点睛】

本篇作文贴近实际，每个人都有第一次，挑选一件自己有话可说的来写即可。但是需要注意文章逻辑，语篇顺序，注意连接词的使用和长短句结合。这样的话，文章符合英文造句习惯，更容易获得高分。

4．（·广东南方求实教育集团中考模拟） 《朗读者》、《中国诗词大会》等文化类节目唤醒了中国人的阅读情结。为了激发市民们的阅读兴趣,广州开展了“书香羊城”活动。 请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对阅读的看法,并对如何培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动提出建议。 阅读的好处 1、 阅读使人睿智 2、补充1-2个看法 培养阅读习惯 1、每天至少阅读20分钟 2、补充1-2个建议 开展班级阅读活动 1、观看《朗读者》,分享节目推荐的好作品。 2、补充1-2个建议 注意:1.参考词汇:《朗读者》（Readers）: 作品: works （n.） 2.文章应包括所有要点:

3.词数80词以上（文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数）: 4.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分.

The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，内容包括提示内容以及谈谈自己对阅读的看法，并对培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动方面提出建议，人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时，同时注意恰当使用连词使文章逻辑关系更为紧密。高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不仅能帮助我们更多地了解这个世界，而且能带给我们幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列连词短语。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天坚持阅读是一个好习惯。Keeping reading every day动名词短语作主语。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.另外，我们的教室里还可以设置一个读书角，以便课后随时阅读。此句是一个复合句，主句是含有情态动词的被动语态，so that引导的是目的状语从句。

5．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。 提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos

提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show? What are you going to do on the show? What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show? Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend. ______________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply. Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.

I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.

We’re looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】

本文属于话题作文，邀请外教史密斯先生参加英语戏剧展示活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．（·浙江中考模拟）假如你是李华，是某英文电台“ Say it”栏目的兼职编辑。最近你收到一名叫王平的中学生发来的电子邮件，向你们栏目组求助。请你根据电子邮件内容给她回

复一封电子邮件，帮助她解答困惑。

Dear Li Hua,

I' m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know Wechat has become a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 's worse, they have changed my password（密码） so that I can’t use it. There has been a \"cold war\" between us for over a week. What should I do? Yours, Wang Ping

要求：1．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

2．词数80-100左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：欺骗tick；许可permission

Dear Wang Ping,

I'm sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using

Wechat.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe things will get better,

Yours Li Hua

【答案】Dear Wang Ping I‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, your problem is very common . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.

You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try telling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission. I believe things will get better.

Yours Li Hu

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 【点睛】

这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求,层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?

7．（·阜宁县新世纪实验中学中考模拟）书面表达

初中的生活美好而短暂。临近中考，压力骤增，父母的唠叨，老师的殷殷期望，自己的学业与梦想……倾诉是一副良方。请给七月的你写一封信，谈谈你身边存在的问题，你打算如何解决，鼓励自己生活还有诗和远方。请根据以下提示写一封给自己的信。

要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，语句通顺，上下文连贯； 2．必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3．词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Future Me,

It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that … Your sincerely

【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two aspects.First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself.

In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and communicating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic （悲观的）. So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success. 【解析】 【详解】

本文写给未来的自己，目的在于倾诉压力，寻求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出导致压力的两个方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every day.用First, Second点出。第二自然段提到释放压力的方法，应用In order to表目的。用What’s more表递进结构。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily点题呼吁。整篇文章层次分明，结构紧凑。

8．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达

假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。 写作要点：

1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。 2介绍活动的情况：

（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。

（2）本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。 （3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。 3说一说网上购书有什么好处。 写作要求：

1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4至少80词。 Dear Angel,

How are you doing? Best wishes! Yours, Cathy

【答案】Dear Angel,

How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。

Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next

month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another . Best wishes!

Yours, Cathy

【解析】 【详解】

本文属于材料作文，向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动，并且告诉外教同学们现在喜欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引导非性定语从句。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．（·江苏扬州教育学院附中中考模拟）你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛，你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述，请根据提示，以“Kindness is a gift”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。

要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Kindness is a gift Dear classmates,

I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【答案】例文Dear classmates,

I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.

I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【解析】 【详解】

你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛，你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述，请根据提示，以“Kindness is a gift”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。内容要求中指出了写作要点，动笔前一定要认真阅读内容要点，根据内容要点组织材料，确定句子人称，时态等问题。可以先把各要点用句子表达出来，然后再组合成文。写作中注意语意通顺，符合逻辑关系，为了使短文更显得有逻辑性，在列举自己的优势时，可以适当使用序数词。举出的例子要有说服力，想象合理并适当发挥，不能遗漏要点。注意采用一些习惯的句式，固定短语，以使自己的演讲稿更有文采。写完后多读几遍，适当修改。

【点睛】

这是一篇非常优秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson.这些给文章增色不少。

10．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：

（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）…… （3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥2—3句）…… 注意：

（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming

【答案】例文Hello! Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.

My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Li Ming 【解析】 【详解】

本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

11．（·福建中考模拟）亲爱的初三同学，考试来临，毕业在即，你遇到了人生路上的转折点，你的生活、学习平添了一些烦恼和压力。当前正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力非常重要。请以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇90词左右的短文，谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力，以及要如何面对困难，解决问题的方法。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

要求：内容完整；书写规范；语法准确；语句通顺连贯。

参考词：stress（压力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，help

How to solve our stress

The entrance examination is coming. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these

days.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】How to solve our stress?

The entrance examination is coming .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?

First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。 And we should also learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we had better see a doctor. 【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力，以及要如何面对困难，解决问题的方法。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。根据所给的材料可知本文时态要用一般现在时来写，主语为第一人称，写作时要注意主谓一致的问题。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

参考词：stress （ 压力） , nervous，sleep , time , healthy , smile , sports， help 可以用到的短语有： take part in 参加；

communicate with sb. 和某人交流； try one's best to do sth. 尽全力做某事； too much 太多。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，抓住重点，理顺要点。草拟提纲，分清各要点之间的内在联系，寻求逻辑次序，分出层次，确定如何下手，使表达内容条理清楚。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

12．（·山东中考模拟）“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！

要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。100 词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.

As old saying goes, \"all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.\" To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.

Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies. Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well

I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful. 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

13．（·四川中考模拟） 书面表达

本周你们班召开了一次主题班会“毕业前，我能为学校做些什么？”大家踊跃发言，作为第三小组成员，请你根据各小组的情况汇报以及你们小组的讨论情况，写一个总结交给老师。 第一小组 第二小组 第三小组 把我们用过的书本和学习用品赠送给七年级、八年级的弟弟妹妹， 尤其是家庭贫困的同学。 筹钱，为学校图书馆购买书籍。 ...... 提示词： 赠送 present 用过的 used 注意：

1. 字数不少于80词； 2. 补充好本小组讨论情况；

3. 要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等。 What can you do for your school?

As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. 【答案】What can you do for your school?

As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1

thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us. 【解析】 【分析】

本片书面表达要求学生写出一个班会会后的总结。 【详解】

这是一篇材料作文。表格中一个两个组的讨论结果，第三组是需要考生围绕着主题自己补充的，尽量避免与前面两组重复。我们可以按照总-分-总的结构来写。 首先引出此次班会的主题；其次分别写出三个小组的讨论结果；最后可以对三个小组进行总结，表达情感。在语言上要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

14．（·河北中考模拟）请以“Never Give Up”为题,写一篇短文,简要描述图中的三个画面,并谈谈自己的想法｡

要求:

1. 文中不得涉及真实的人名,校名和地名｡ 2. 可以适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺｡

3. 词数:80个词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数｡

提示词:the long - distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practice

Never Give Up

The P.E. exam is coming. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day.

Some_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Never Give Up

The P.E. exam is coming. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do long-distance running. After school they run on the playground together. They compete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.

Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the P.E. exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，题目中有三张图片，展示了九年级的学生们在为体育测试做准备，我们应根据图片，以Never give up为题，写一篇文章，简要描述三个画面，并谈一谈自己的想法。写作之前，应仔细观察图片，看清楚图片展示的内容，三张图片展示了三个体育项目，跑步、铅球和跳远，写作时，应使用形象、直观的语言，详细介绍图片中的内容，然后组织语言，串联成文。文章可以分两段，第一段介绍图片内容，第二段谈论自己的想法。题目中有词汇的提示，写作时应注意使用。通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时，根据表达的需要确定应使用的时态。注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，穿插使用并列句和复合句，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。 【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文的描述符合图片中的内容，叙述非常详细，并对图片展开了合理的想象，使文章的内容更加丰富。第二段中发表了自己的感想，升华了文章的主题。其次短文中句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，语法规范，语言得体。短文以一般现在时为主，正确使用了谓语动词的形式。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，提升了文章档次和水平，整篇文章表达流畅。短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They compete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before.等

等。

15．（·北京中考模拟）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的中华传统节日”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的传统节日是什么，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢这个节日。

提示词语:festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time 提示问题: What's your favorite traditional festival? What do you usually do during the festival? Why do you like it?

There are many traditional festivals in

China.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Mid-autumn Festival and it usually comes on August 15 of the lunar year.

On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily.

I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据话题要求来介绍一下中国的传统节日。根据所提供的提示词语可知，要求介绍中国的传统节日：中秋节。可以从你最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢中秋节三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意在给报社的投稿中必须包含提示词语中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语把所给的提示问题回答清楚就行。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】

On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在节日里，我们会从不同的地方回家，和全家团聚，一起吃大餐。由and连接的并列句。 【高分句型二】

I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜欢中秋节，不仅因为我喜欢美味的月饼，而且因为它是一个家庭聚会时间，我真的很享受家庭成员之间的爱。句子中运用了not only…… but also……，还有because引导的原因状语从句。

16．（·甘肃中考模拟）（年浙江绍兴）书面表达。76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。 同学主要观点 努力学习 尊重父母 服务社会 计划未来 ……（至少两条） 你的观点

注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； （2）你的观点至少两条； （3）词数：80—100；

（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：尊重respect

短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life. 【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life. Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.

From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life. 【解析】

试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点，所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：do a survey about sth关于某事做调查；respect their parents,尊敬他们的父母；look after照顾；make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的

计划；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了宾语从句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点，也是提分的经典句子。 考点：材料作文。

17．（·浙江中考模拟） 书面表达

假如你叫Tom。你们学校正在开设国际课程，下个月将有新的外教来学校上课。以下是外教Rhian的微信，请根据该内容回复一条90词左右的短信，可适当发挥。

Hey,Rhian.Thanks for your message.__________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Hey,Rhian.Thanks for your message.`I am writing to tell you about your things in last Wechat.There are fifty students in our class.Most of us like English.I think a good teacher is organized. A good teacher cares and is always ready for his or her students. A good teacher is always fair and respects their students. A good teacher always works hard.

The weather is warm here.You may carry some sweaters with you.You needn’t carry heavy clothes.We have somewhere interesting.So in your spare time you can go boating on the lake.After school you can play football with us. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。假设你是Tom，学校正在开设国际课程，下个月将有新的外教来学校上课，要求你就外教Rhian的微信回复一条短信。动笔前一定要认真阅读外教Rhian的微信，所回的短信中对涉及的问题都要有所回应。根据内容可知本文时态主要是一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第二人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己

熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

18．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

在学习中, 不良的学习习惯导致学习效率不高。以 How to improve learning efficiency 为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容如下：

1. 说明是否存在学习效率不高的现象；

2. 分析自己或他人效率不高的原因，并举例说明； 3. 根据你所列出的原因，提出相应的建议。 参考词汇：效率 efficiency 注意：

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to improve learning efficiency

In my class, _______________________________________________________________ 【答案】How to improve learning efficiency

In my class, some of my classmates have asked me how to study better. They often say, “why aren’t my grades improving even after I study harder?” In my opinion, it has to do with learning efficiency.

First, some students spend a lot of time on other things, including computer games and TV programs. Although they always finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. Second, some students stay up late studying. They might only have five hours left for sleeping. Because they’re so sleepy, they can’t pay their full attention in class. How can they improve if they don’t get enough sleep?

My suggestion is that students should use their time wisely. If you cannot control yourself, you’d better ask your teachers or parents for help. They can help you make a plan.

If you follow the suggestion and take action, I believe your learning efficiency will be greatly improved. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求以How to improve learning efficiency 为题，写一篇英语短文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

19．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

学校英语社团正在举办英语征文比赛，请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。 生活中会有不愉快的事，如：…… 对自己微笑 对他人微笑 使你开心、恢复自信；使你忘掉烦恼。 使人与人更亲近，带来友谊。 微笑是一种人人易懂的语言。 注意：

1．短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译；

2．表格中省略部分须用2至3句话作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Learn to Smile

Smile is an attitude （态度） to life．

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Learn to Smile

Smile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。同时Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship.等多种特殊句式和非谓语动词结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，条理清晰，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们翻译拓展成一个个英文句子。还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。

20．（·福建中考模拟）回首三年，相信你有满满的回忆。在你将踏上新的旅程之际，请给新入学的学弟学妹们两则初中生活的建议，并说说原因，让他们的初中生活更加精彩。

请参考下面的思维导图用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activities

My Advice for Junior High

【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in your life. As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork, but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school. 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如as a student，must be，filled with，get used to，relax ourselves，two pieces of advice，fall into，join new clubs，take up，not only…but also，make more friends，be helpful to等。而非谓语动词结构To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice.和As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。